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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 0:49:38 GMT -5
A big explosion comes as Ryan Franchise walks down the ramp with a microphone.
"I am the real main event i have been busting skulls my entire career and the fact that i was invited to this place makes me glad that i get to bust some skulls again"
He slides into the ring like a snake, Stand on the top turnbuckle.
"You people are lucky that i came here. Other wrestling businesses would kill to get me in their business"
Glares at the crowd in disbelief that they would boo him.
"Now wait just one minute i am the face of wrestling and you, you better show some respect. people around the world bow at my presence and some are frightened by me so shut it! You people don't deserve me as a superstar but i will prove that i am the best at what i do."
He Jumps out of the ring.
"It is time to fear the Franchise Known as Ryan"
He Drops the mic and heads to the back.
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 0:50:38 GMT -5
Is it ok that i post This Bad guys Formula after someone says something about the promo
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Post by Osiris on Jul 20, 2009 0:55:19 GMT -5
Yes to your question, and as soon as I see the formula it'll be a yes to let you in from me. Only need 2 more after that.
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:13:09 GMT -5
SVR 2009 Ryan Franchise Nickname: Kickapoo Kid HUD name:Ryan Announcer name: Ryan Weight 251 lbs Home Town: Missouri (hens Kickapoo Kid) Crowd Reaction: Dirty/Bad
Hair 38/71 Brown Eye 8/9 White not custom the color white they give you Facial Hair Templates 1/27 Brown
Eye Brows Y axis 100 Thickness 19 Depth 34 Angle 0
Mouth Thickness -100 everything else in mouth 0 trust me it looks awsome
Nose Size -49 height 26 width 20 everything else in face morphing 0 unless you can make everything else look better but i think it looks great left as that
Neck height -40 width 3 Depth -28
Chest Height 31 width 34 Depth 6
Shoulders height -54 width -6 depth 0
abdomen Height 14 width 6 depth 5 rest in body 0 i just like that look
Definition 4/9
Headwear other 23/36 Black
Upper Body Elbow Pads 2/10 black Wristbands 19/21 darkest black should look like Matt Hardy length wristband from wwf days
Lower Body Wrestling tights 5/15 black underwear 3/23 Wrestling tights design 8/159 white on both legs then again black should look black with white outline Boot 2/37 black
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:15:57 GMT -5
i still have to make my finisher but here is what it is what i am going to make the Franchiser Poison Fog and Rko
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:19:55 GMT -5
theme as he comes out is Coming Undone-KoRn
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:35:10 GMT -5
His entrance is now Randy orton old and evolution theme
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:35:28 GMT -5
His move set is just edges with the Franchiser and all HHH standard actions Shawn michaels diving all this can be done though auto setting
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Post by Osiris on Jul 20, 2009 1:50:18 GMT -5
Okay, cool. Just waiting for the signatures and finishers.
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 1:52:24 GMT -5
Signitures Chokeslam and spear any one will do any spear and any chokeslam
Finishers CodeBreaker and The Franchiser which i exlplained
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Post by Osiris on Jul 20, 2009 1:58:45 GMT -5
Just for me to get this clear, The Franchiser is just the two steps? Poison Fog to RKO?
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 2:00:20 GMT -5
well a kick in the gut and then poison fog then RKO
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 11:57:21 GMT -5
his championship entrance is Edge
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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 20:46:48 GMT -5
Man i need people to say yes to me or i am stuck here
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Post by Spazz on Jul 20, 2009 23:37:06 GMT -5
Let me make just one thing clear, sending an admin a PM asking him to say yes will not give you an automatic yes from said admin.
That being said, apart from some capitalization and punctuation mistakes that everyone makes from time to time, the promo is readable, appealing to the eye, overall a good start. Just keep promoing and reading other promos and you'll probably improve over time.
So, I'm giving a yes. Congratulations, you got your wish.
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