It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan!

spongeruss1 Tackling Dummy Posts: 3	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 20, 2009 23:38:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 20, 2009 23:38:37 GMT -5 Thank you man i really appreciate it.

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It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 21, 2009 0:36:01 GMT -5

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Post by Hazeone-Supreme on Jul 21, 2009 0:36:01 GMT -5

OK, so here is my opinion: (and this is in no way me being an asshole, cause I am anything but)

First off, the promo. Personally, I wasn't 100% impressed. Not saying it was a bad promo but I think it could have used more. The formula seems to be on point, although (and this is just a personal gripe) I would have liked to see everything in one shot in detail (i.e. Appearance, entrance, moveset) Makes it easier to transfer into the games.

If you can fix these up then you have a yes from me. Overall it seems to be on point so for now I will say yes, as long as you take this criticism not as a bad thing, but a good thing.

"I Looked For Answers And I Blindly Followed, Rotted Pieces Of Religion I Swallowed"

The Apokalypse: 24 Wins-7 Losses- 2 Draws
Carnivore: 15 Wins-13 Losses

spongeruss1 Tackling Dummy Posts: 3	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 21, 2009 0:43:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 21, 2009 0:43:10 GMT -5 thank you man do you want me to post the changes before i start doing promos cause Osiris already made him so maybe i should post changes

Hazeone-Supreme Main-Eventer No-Life logo designer and simmer un-extraordinaire Eat it BITCHES!!! Posts: 392	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 21, 2009 0:46:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hazeone-Supreme on Jul 21, 2009 0:46:34 GMT -5 Your pretty much in so feel free to promo, and good luck bro!
	"I Looked For Answers And I Blindly Followed, Rotted Pieces Of Religion I Swallowed" The Apokalypse: 24 Wins-7 Losses- 2 Draws Carnivore: 15 Wins-13 Losses

spongeruss1 Tackling Dummy Posts: 3	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 21, 2009 0:50:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 21, 2009 0:50:43 GMT -5 Well i have to wait for Osiris' new character the assistant GM to make his address he will be mentioning my signing.

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It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Jul 28, 2009 13:52:26 GMT -5

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Post by spongeruss1 on Jul 28, 2009 13:52:26 GMT -5

Now for Dragon Kid's Promo

The arena goes dark and then an explosion happens with a masked man coming out to the song Paralyzer. He walks out and down the ramp into the ring. He grabs a microphone.

"Ladies and Gentlemen i have come here for one reason to bring something new to the AWF. I am the High flying Dragon Kid . Now who wants to take this on i will destroy anyone in my path. one i hit you with the Scream Reflection you will fall. Ryan Franchise was one thing, but i am the opposite side of the spectrum."

He then turns to the crowd and back to the Titantron.

"I am READY to take on what ever you throw at me."

spongeruss1 Tackling Dummy Posts: 3	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Aug 6, 2009 22:09:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spongeruss1 on Aug 6, 2009 22:09:40 GMT -5 NEW attire parts same tight just white tights white bandana

spongeruss1 Tackling Dummy Posts: 3	It is time to Fear the Franchise known as Ryan! Aug 9, 2009 21:47:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spongeruss1 on Aug 9, 2009 21:47:20 GMT -5 UPDATE Ryan's Entrance comes out like Jeff Hardy New theme Careless whisper cover by Seether Titantron DX