Jaymes

[ace]

Hair: 64, black (no style change)
Eyes: 1, black (no style change)
Skin: 1 (custom color) X:90 Y:3
Lips: (Custom color) X:99 Y:0 (shade) -18
Height: 6'5
body type: 0
Tattoo: (right arm) 7, black
Head wear: (glasses) 6, black
Jackets: 20, style 2, black
Pants: 38, black
Shoes: 17: black
Voice: 3
Match Specialty: ECW extreme rules
Fighting styles: Hardcore and Brawler
Name: Jaymes
HUD name: Jaymes
Call name: James
Hometown: Brooklyn, New York
Weight: 241
Crowd reaction: Good
Brand: Smackdown

Moves

Ring in: Jumping 2
Ring out: Quick Ring out
Taunts: CM Punk 3, Taunt swing right arm, Triple H D-X, John Cena 2
Strike attacks: Body Punch, Dropkick 2, Back chop 3, clothesline 3
Fist Of Fury: Body Punch, Boxing Hook punch, Jump spin back kick
Grapple: (quick) arm whip, sweep 3, headlock takeover, european uppercut (Fighting style 1) Suplex slam, extreme twist of fate, widowmaker, gutbuster 1 (ultimate con. 1) Powerbomb (fighting style 2) Old School, STO, Throat thrust 5, snapmare & dropkick 2 (ultimate con. 2) Backbreaker
Back grapple: Side effect 2, Edge O'Matic 2, Backbreaker 9, Throw Back
Ground strike: Angry stomp, Spiral leg drop, Elbow drop 1
Ground grapple: Knee Attack 3, Neck Snap, Leg drop 2, Flip Senton attack 3
Corner strike: Clothesline & Bulldog, Shining Wizard 2 (siting) Turnbuckle dropkick 2
Corner grapples: DDT 12, DDT 16, Kane Strikes, Superplex
Corner back grapple: Double Axe Handle 5, Tarantula, Toss 1, Rolling Powerbomb
Sitting corner grapple: Running Face Wash
Groggy on ropes: Fury Strikes
Standing outside attack: Vaulting body press 2
Diving attack (standing): ECW diving kick, Missile drop kick
Diving attack (down): Diving leg drop 1, Diving Elbow
Running Strike: Jumping Knee Attack 1, Clothesline 8
Running grapple: DDT 3, Spear 2
Behind running grapple: Throw back, Triple H low kick
Down attack: Running Leg drop (both)
Counter attack: Spinebuster 6, Flapjack 3
Tag (standing): Dropkick & Rolling clutch, Double Suplex, Double, Punches 2, Double dropkick
Tag (corner): Poetry in Motion, Kick to gut 1, Spike Piledriver, Backbreaker & Leg drop
Finishers: Shoulder Block 3, 450 Splash pin

Entrance

Intro: (Motion) Edge (lighting) Shawn Michaels
Stage: (motion) Edge (fireworks) Kane stage (lighting) Shawn Michaels (pyro when he raises arm) (name plate 2 seconds in)
Ramp: (Motion) CM Punk (lighting) Shawn Michaels
Ring-in: (motion) Shawn Michaels D-X (lighting) Shawn Michaels
Ring: (Motion) Shawn Michaels (fireworks) Ring fireworks 1 (lighting) Shawn Michaels (fireworks work with the Shawn pose)
Finalize: (champion entrance) Shawn Michaels D-X (Movie) D-X (music) Bobby Lashley


Scene

it was about 7:00 and I just came from the gym. I started to make my way to the door of my car and I ways stop by a man. "Hey you like to watch wrestling". "Yes why". The man gave me tickets to the show and walked away "how random". I open my car door that was parked outside of the gym and went to the show. On the way to the show I turn on the radio and I was surfing the stations. I stop at a red light and on the radio I heard that the AWF show was coming on. So I looked at the tickets and it said AWF meltdown.

The light turn green and I push the gas and zoom to the event. I ran up the stairs, I got to the floor that the tickets told me to be. "Ok sir the ticket please" I gave the man the tickets that I have. "Sir you have two tickets" "sorry sir you have to stay here and watch meltdown from the TV". "Ok whatever" the man walked way to the bathroom. I watch the match and it was extreme and so cool I could not believe it.

Then I saw something that I didn't like two men against one they were beating the crap out of this one guy and he was bleeding the entire place. “hell no I got to save that guy" there was a laptop where the man was working so I looked at it "cool this controls the music and the lights.”ok music what song ace of spades go now the light have it black than glow green, I hope this works" I pressed play on the laptop and than like up at the TV the light went out "yes now this is my time to shine. I run down to the arena and the music stared to play.
I ran down the runway and in to the ring the two men run at me. I ran and did a double close line the both fell. I pick up one man and throw him in to the turnbuckle post and the other one I stomped him out. Then I went outside of the ring and got two tables a ladder and a chair and push then all in the ring. I went in to the ring and picked up his chair and started to hit them with the chair. the two men were bleeding I got a table and sat one up then put one guy on it then I did the same thing with the other table but I put one table on top of the other. One man was on the top table and one was on the top.

I set the ladder up and the crown is going wild. I on the top of the ladder and I jumped and did the 450 splash on then two men. The woman on the outside had to slide a mic in the ring. I got up and I pick up the mic and said"AWF remember this because as long as there is hobag that like fuckin up matches ill be here. I picked up the man that was jumped and put him on one of the man in the match

[Osiris]

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that your a friend of Jackel, with your IP addresses are exactly the same, and Jackel doesn't strike me as the type to make multiple profiles.

As for your promo, it seemed a bit choppy, like you wanted to add stuff, but it didn't work out well. But I believe that if given time, this can be fixed. So, with that in mind, I will say yes, although my fellow admins might not be as kind.

[AJ Riles]

Nov 26, 2008 19:41:27 GMT -5 Osiris said:

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that your a friend of Jackel, with your IP addresses are exactly the same, and Jackel doesn't strike me as the type to make multiple profiles.

Good, 'cause, y'know, that's AGAINST PROBOARDS' RULES.

Oh, in any case, where to start...

First, I can't say for sure it will, but I get this sinking feeling that one person on the entire site using first-person POV could cause some confusion/complications later on.

Second, the grammar seems a bit...how to put this...? Uh...lackluster, I guess. If you do get in, I HIGHLY recommend hanging around the "Promos 101" board for a while.

Third, and I'm surprised CK hasn't been by to mention this yet, but... Original music would be preferred. "Originality makes e-fedding fun", after all.

All that said, I'll hold off on my vote for the time being...

[Hazeone-Supreme]

After reading this, I have to say that while it did keep me interested I felt that it was a bit bland. I liked the idea of someone actually jumping in a match to save someone they don't even know. That was kool. The whole "I walked out to the door" thing...I guess I might have to get used to it. Not so much a big fan of speech like that but to each is own. Overall, the promo was not bad. With a little work, I think you would be a good addition so I would have to say Yes.

[CK Malicious]

Mr Riles, that would of been on my post.. yes Original music please would be nice.

As for my vote im gonna hold off too, but i will say stick around, come into promo 101 and we can help you get better and then bring your character into AWF.

[SwitchBack]

Since it seems that nobody else has noticed, I figured I should point out that he used "Ace of Spades" in the promo itself! I'm guessing he's using that song as his theme tune?

Got to agree with everyone else on the first-person perspective - doesn't really work for me ...