Jackel

[Osiris]

Okay, I have a few things that need to be said:

1. You first posted this in the roster section. If/When your character is accepted to the main roster, it will be moved back.

2. I am perfectly fine with someone else using the Tombstone. However, sharing the same name for the same move just rubs me the wrong way. I understand that this very well could just be a mistake on your part, so just consider this a heads up.

3. Just something that nags at me, mostly because myself and a few others will be making him should he be accepted, but you didn't but much as to what he will be introduced as, nickname (if any), and weight (which I will have to guess will be in the upper heavy area).

Other then that, your good by me as far as your promo skills. I will say yes if you will heed my warnings.

[AJ Riles]

Oct 26, 2008 13:58:51 GMT -5 jackel said:

But out of no-where, the lights go out.......... and every 1 is confused.

Oct 26, 2008 13:58:51 GMT -5 jackel said:

Well U better find out who did it.

Uhm...yeah, I can tell you right now, I ain't gonna pass stuff like this in promos.

Oct 26, 2008 14:51:38 GMT -5 Osiris said:

I am perfectly fine with someone else using the Tombstone. However, sharing the same name for the same move just rubs me the wrong way. I understand that this very well could just be a mistake on your part, so just consider this a heads up.

That's what happens when you have the same gimmick as everyone and their mother.

[jackel]

Well Jackel don't have a nickname and he is a super heavyweight but if that is not possible, then make him the highest as possible. And what is wrong with my promo??

[AJ Riles]

Specifically, my qualms are with "every 1" and "U".

You can talk that way all you like out of character, but I won't be passing it so long as it's in a promo.

[AJ Riles]

Oct 26, 2008 19:09:31 GMT -5 jackel said:

Well Jackel don't have a nickname and he is a super heavyweight but if that is not possible, then make him the highest as possible. And what is wrong with my promo??

For the curious, superweights = no.

[jackel]

ok I understand

[CK Malicious]

OK i'm with Riles on the: Every1 and U thing.

Also im not too hot on the gimmick... we already have a resident "soul taker" and the devils henchbitch, so maybe a re-think on that is in order.

I'm not gonna can you totally because your promo, isn't too bad.

So my suggestion would be, try again with a different look and gimmick for Jackal

[Osiris]

Oct 27, 2008 19:53:58 GMT -5 CK Malicious said:

OK i'm with Riles on the: Every1 and U thing.

Also im not too hot on the gimmick... we already have a resident "soul taker" and the devils henchbitch, so maybe a re-think on that is in order.

I'm not gonna can you totally because your promo, isn't too bad.

So my suggestion would be, try again with a different look and gimmick for Jackal

Ah come on CK. I was going to have fun with that.

[jackel]

ok now I am confused

[dragon]

not my place to but in here but , I'm as confused as he is (jackal) , you all accept his promo except for his use of abbreviations , but is it a thumbs up on his gimmick undertaker , Kane thing or should he rethink his gimmick maybe a bounty hunter or something and re submit his caw as such ?? he wants to join so could you guys help him out , with a yes or no on his gimmick , so he knows if he should submit a new one or not

[jackel]

This is the old Jackel. I want the NEW Jackel in AWF. Please read the NEW/fixed version that I posted and give comments and maybe you will like him now

[Osiris]

Well, it's fixed. He changed everything that was asked of him, besides the minor things that really don't matter. I said yes to begin with, so what do the rest of you say?

[jackel]

So every one likes the new promo I posted? Plus he looks really different! don't for get I changed his appearance!