blindman
Jobber
Can You SEE the PAIN!?
Posts: 17
|
Post by blindman on Feb 4, 2011 15:00:20 GMT -5
I don't have their forum set up yet. So I'm going to give you the promo for them and I would like feedback. Thanks.
In a late night cemetery, two men are standing over a tombstone. One man has very long hair as a mask covers his face. The other is blind and yet, can still see. The two tall giants stand, emotionless, over the casket.
Blindman: Brother, how is it that it has been ten years that we stepped in a ring. Thank god for television. AWF sounds like a nice place.
Pain: It is a shame. AWF looks a little... bland. They don't SEE the PAIN! I say we make our way over there.
As they stood over the casket, it reads "Here lies all that could not see the pain" Pain pulls axe from underneath the casket. He then looks at the coffin for a split second and chops the axe into the coffin and leaves it there.
Blindman: I spent a lot on that casket! You're buying the next one... mark it AWF this time.
Pain looks into his brothers' eyes, seeing the blindness that fulfills blindman.
Pain: I worry about you my brother. You put so much effort into making them see pain. I will prove to you that pain is only their beginning. Why is it that we always have to be the factor of pain. My brother, I promise that AWF will learn. All teams will fall. And anyone in our way... will see the pain!
BlindMan: I agree. We have no business here anymore. Let's go see what AWF has in store for us.
As the brothers walk away, Pain stops. Blindman turns and gazes at his broher.
Pain: You think that maybe, just maybe, we don't have to hurt a lot of people this time? I mean, I enjoy my job and the reasons I fight. But I can't seem to shake off the innocent souls I've stolen.
BlindMan: It's ok Pain. I have a feeling that it's our time. People will learn. And no promises to the pain. Let's go.
The two brothers walk away, fading into the darkness. What will become of AWF when Blindman and is crazed brother Pain come to AWF?
|
|
|
Post by Osiris on Feb 5, 2011 21:00:28 GMT -5
Looks good man.
|
|
|
Post by AJ Riles on Feb 5, 2011 22:49:39 GMT -5
Second. I'd say that this is probably the best tryout I've seen in a while (whether or not that's saying much however, is irrelevant). You got my seal of approval, kid.
|
|
Hazeone-Supreme
Main-Eventer
No-Life logo designer and simmer un-extraordinaire
Eat it BITCHES!!!
Posts: 392
|
Post by Hazeone-Supreme on Feb 6, 2011 4:46:42 GMT -5
I know I am no admin anymore........but Klown and Jester are excited, and Klown wont shut up so I will let him type this next part. Go Ahead!
"Am...Am I on? O.K.......(Clears Throat)...Cool."
God he's fuckin annoying.
|
|
blindman
Jobber
Can You SEE the PAIN!?
Posts: 17
|
Post by blindman on Feb 7, 2011 11:46:30 GMT -5
Thanks. Jackel had said that AWF is a good place for Pain and Blindman to start. As for Klown and Jester; Blindman and Pain have something for you.
Pain: Klown... Jester... You've both seen the pain. It would be an Honor to step in the ring with you. Either with you OR against you.
Blindman: I agree. We share the vivid memories of past pain. But I promise you both, we are not easy to take down. I have a feeling that The Apokalypse and The Devils Advocates will meet on more than one occasion and only time will tell what will happen.
Yeah... they sound excited as well... Well I'm glad you like the promo. Is there any other comments or recommendations anyone has for me?
|
|
blindman
Jobber
Can You SEE the PAIN!?
Posts: 17
|
Post by blindman on Feb 8, 2011 16:17:07 GMT -5
PAIN
HEAD - 1
HAIR - SUPERSTAR: 45, Black
FACE - EYES - 1, Black
BODY
- HEIGHT: 6'7"
- SIZE: 2
TATTOOS - FIXED DESIGNS - - ARMS: 14 (both) Black
CLOTHING
HEADWEAR - OTHER: 30, Both colors Black
UPPER BODY - OUTFITS: 2, Black - ELBOW PADS: 2, Black - HANDS: both hands, 8, both colors Black
LOWER BODY - BOTTOMS: 23, style 2, 1st color Black - FOOTWEAR - - BOOTS & SHOES: 2, style 3, Black
Attributes: Maxed Out Name: Pain Abbreviated Name: Pain Audio Name: The Monster Crowd: Cheer HomeTown: Parts Unknown Show Raw ENTRANCE ATTIRE AND CINEMATIC ATTIRE
- MENU SCREEN POSE: 14 - ABILITIES - 1) Resiliency 2) Durability 3) Fired Up 4) Hammer Throw 5) Kip Up
ENTRANCE
- EASY CREATION - - MOTION: Kane - CHAMPION ENTRANCE: Kane Champ - MULTI-TITLE ENTRANCE: Superstar 42 - MOVIE: Batista - MUSIC: Welcome to the Family - Avenged SevenFold
MOVESET
- STANDARD ACTIONS - - RING IN/OUT - - IN: Normal 1 - OUT: Backward Out - APRON RING IN/OUT - - IN RING: Normal 1 - ON APRON: Normal 2 - APRON RINGSIDE IN/OUT - - STEP ON: Normal 1 - STEP OFF: Normal 2 - TAUNTS - 1) Undertaker 3 2) Beat Chest 3) Sheamus 4) Powerful 3
- STANDING - - STRIKE ATTACKS - 1) Body Punch 1 2) Kane Uppercut 3) Undertaker Punch 4) Throat Thrust 1 5) Throat Thrust 2 - STRIKE COMBO - 1) Body Punch 1 2) Throat Thrust 1 3) Throat Thrust 2 - STRONG STRIKES - 1) Back Hand 2) Big Boot 6 - KICK REVERSAL - - ATTACK: Clothesline 1 - GRAPPLE: Take Down - KICK REVERSAL: Sharpshooter - PUNCH REVERSAL: Crossface - REVERSAL: Shove Back - CHAIN GRAPPLE - - FRONT FACELOCK - - ATTACK: European Uppercut 1 - SUBMISSION: Bearhug 1) Exploder Suplex 2) Hammer and Sickle 3) Gutwrench Suplex 4) Neck Lock Suplex - SIDE HEADLOCK - - ATTACK: Knee to Gut - SUB: Walls of Jericho 1) Belly to Belly 2 2) Drop Toe Facebuster 3) Hangman's Elbow 4) T-Bone Suplex 3 - WRIST LOCK - - ATTACK: Elbow Smash 2 - SUB: Sleeper Hold 1) STO 2) Russian Leg Sweep 2 3) Arm Drag 2 4) Choke Toss Suplex - WAIST LOCK - - ATTACK: Elbow Smash 4 - SUB: Cobra Clutch 1) Electric Chair Drop 2) Back Suplex 5 3) Rear Headbutt 4) DDT 10 - GROGGY GRAPPLE - - GROGGY GRAPPLE - 1) 12 Step 2) Gutwrench Powerpomb 3) Showstopper 4) One-Handed Backbreaker 1 - GROGGY GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) Argentine Backbreaker 2) Cobra Clutch Backbreaker 3) Neckbreaker 4 4) Inverted Powerslam - STRUGGLE SUB - - FRONT: Bear Hug - BEHIND: Cobra Clutch
- GROUND - - STRIKE ATTACKS - 1) Wrestling Hero Stomp 2) Wrestling Hero Stomp - GRAPPLE FACING UP - - UPPER: Outlaw Stomp - SIDE: Walk Over - LOWER: Belly Stomp - GRAPPLE FACING DOWN - - UPPER: Brain Chop 2 - SIDE: Soccorball Kick 3 - LOWER: Knee Slam - SUB GRAPPLE - - UPPER: Triangle Hold - SIDE: Camel Clutch 2 - LOWER: Sharpshooter - CORNER - - STRIKE ATTACKS - - CORNER GROGGY - - FRONT: Punch to Head 3 - BEHIND: Overhand Punch 2 - RUNNING FRONT: Turnbuckle Clothesline - RUNNING BEHIND: Clothesline 11 - SEATED: Punch to Head 4 - RUNNING SEATED: Running Knee Strike 1 - TOP ROPE - - STRIKE: Punch to Head 2 - RUNNING: Big Boot 1 - TREE OF WOE - - STRIKE: Kick to Gut - RUNNING: Low Dropkick - GRAPPLE MOVES - 1) Batista Shoulder Block 2) Clothesline 7 - GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) Final Cut 2) Toss into Ring Post - TOP ROPE GRAPPLE: Pump Up Buster - TOP ROPE GRAPPLE BEHIND: Reverse Death Valley - SEATED CORNER GRAPPLE: Alley Oop Bomb - TREE OF WOE GRAPPLE: Double Knee Backbreaker - EXPLODER TURNBUCKLE: Belly to Belly 5
- ROPE - - GROGGY AGAINST ROPES: Slingshot Suplex
- APRON - - STRIKE ATTACKS - - TO RING: Right Hook - TO RINGSIDE: Axe Handle to Ringside - GRAPPLE - - TO RING: Apron Guillotine Drop - TO APRON: Apron Hip Toss - TO APRON BEHIND: Apron Backbreaker - OUTSIDE APRON: Cut Down - OUTSIDE APRON BEHIND: Apron Low Blow - GROUND - - ATTACK: Apron Leg Drop - GRAPPLE: Apron Big Boot - RUNNING - - TO RINGSIDE: Apron Clothesline - TO APRON: Running Elbow Strike
- DIVING - - DIVING ATTK VS. STANDING - 1) Flying Clothesline 2) Diving Clothesline 2 - DIVING ATTK VS. DOWNED - 1) Diving Leg Drop 4 2) Diving Senton Bomb
- RUNNING - - RUNNING STRIKES: Clothesline 2 - GRAPPLE - 1) Running STO 2) Facebuster Knee Smash - GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) One-Handed Bulldog 2 2) Chop Block - GROUND STRIKES: - IRISH WHIP REBOUND - - ATTACK: Clothesline 2 - GRAPPLE: One-Handed Spinebuster 2 - GRAPPLE: Powerslam 5 - REVERSAL: Knee Lift - PULL BACK ATTACKS - - ATTACK: Big Boot - GRAPPLE: Samoan Drop
- TAG TEAM - - STANDING TAG TEAM - 1) Double Chokeslam 2) Double Neckbreaker 3) Wheelbarrow 4) Clothesline and Chop Block - CORNER TAG TEAM - 1) Chin Lock and Kenka Kick 2) Clothesline and Spear 3) Whip Clothesline 4) Sidewalk and Reverse DDT - TAG TEAM FINISHERS - *Atomic Drop and Big Boot* (See No Evil)
- SPECIAL MOVES - - SIGS - 1) Two-Handed Chokeslam 2 2) Michinoko Driver 2 - FINISHERS - 1) Empty Abyss (CAF) 2) Flatliner - ROYAL RUMBLE - -GRAPPLE- 1) Elbow Smash 2) Body Punch 2 3) Toe Kick 4) Knee Lift -FINISHERS- 1) Chokeslam 2) Chokeslam 3) Chokeslam 4) Chokelsam - LADDER - - STRIKE ATTACK - - NORMAL: Punch to Head - STRONG: Brain Chop - GRAPPLE - - NORMAL: Smash Ladder 1 - GROGGY: Kicks it Down -FINISHERS- 1) Chokeslam 2) Chokelsam - CELL - - CEILING GRAPPLE: Chokeslam - CELL FIN: Powerbomb
- CREATED FINISHER DESCRIPTION:
EMPTY ABYSS
1) Gut Kick 2) Oklahoma Clutch 02 3) Reverse DDT Clutch 05 4) Backbreaker and Electric Chair Position 5) Elevated Powerbomb Clutch 6) Spiral Bomb Lift 7) Spiral Bomb Impact
BLINDMAN
HEAD - 1
HAIR - SUPERSTAR: 73, Black (All)
FACE - EYES - 10, Color 1: White, Color 2: Black -FACIAL HAIR- -GOATEE: 23, Black
BODY
- HEIGHT: 6'7"
- SIZE: 2
TATTOOS - FIXED DESIGNS - - ARMS: 20 (both) Black
CLOTHING
UPPER BODY - TOPS - 7, Style 2, Black - ELBOW PADS: 2, Black - HANDS: both hands, 20, Color 1: Black, Color 2: White LOWER BODY - BOTTOMS: 23, style 2, 1st color Black - FOOTWEAR - - BOOTS & SHOES: 2, style 3, Black
Attributes: Maxed Out Name: Blindman Abbreviated Name: Blindman Audio Name: The Nightmare Crowd: Cheer HomeTown: Parts Unknown Show Raw ENTRANCE ATTIRE AND CINEMATIC ATTIRE
- MENU SCREEN POSE: 12 - ABILITIES - 1) Resiliency 2) Durability 3) Fired Up 4) Hammer Throw 5) Kip Up
ENTRANCE
- EASY CREATION - - MOTION: Undertaker - CHAMPION ENTRANCE: Undertaker - MULTI-TITLE ENTRANCE: Superstar 42 - MOVIE: Batista - MUSIC: Welcome to the Family - Avenged SevenFold
MOVESET
- STANDARD ACTIONS - - RING IN/OUT - - IN: Normal 1 - OUT: Backward Out - APRON RING IN/OUT - - IN RING: Normal 1 - ON APRON: Normal 2 - APRON RINGSIDE IN/OUT - - STEP ON: Normal 1 - STEP OFF: Normal 2 - TAUNTS - 1) Undertaker 3 2) Beat Chest 3) Sheamus 4) Powerful 3
- STANDING - - STRIKE ATTACKS - 1) Body Punch 1 2) Kane Uppercut 3) Undertaker Punch 4) Throat Thrust 1 5) Throat Thrust 2 - STRIKE COMBO - 1) Body Punch 1 2) Throat Thrust 1 3) Throat Thrust 2 - STRONG STRIKES - 1) Back Hand 2) Big Boot 6 - KICK REVERSAL - - ATTACK: Clothesline 1 - GRAPPLE: Take Down - KICK REVERSAL: Sharpshooter - PUNCH REVERSAL: Crossface - REVERSAL: Shove Back - CHAIN GRAPPLE - - FRONT FACELOCK - - ATTACK: European Uppercut 1 - SUBMISSION: Bearhug 1) Exploder Suplex 2) Hammer and Sickle 3) Gutwrench Suplex 4) Neck Lock Suplex - SIDE HEADLOCK - - ATTACK: Knee to Gut - SUB: Walls of Jericho 1) Belly to Belly 2 2) Drop Toe Facebuster 3) Hangman's Elbow 4) T-Bone Suplex 3 - WRIST LOCK - - ATTACK: Elbow Smash 2 - SUB: Sleeper Hold 1) STO 2) Russian Leg Sweep 2 3) Arm Drag 2 4) Choke Toss Suplex - WAIST LOCK - - ATTACK: Elbow Smash 4 - SUB: Cobra Clutch 1) Electric Chair Drop 2) Back Suplex 5 3) Rear Headbutt 4) DDT 10 - GROGGY GRAPPLE - - GROGGY GRAPPLE - 1) 12 Step 2) Gutwrench Powerpomb 3) Showstopper 4) One-Handed Backbreaker 1 - GROGGY GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) Argentine Backbreaker 2) Cobra Clutch Backbreaker 3) Neckbreaker 4 4) Inverted Powerslam - STRUGGLE SUB - - FRONT: Bear Hug - BEHIND: Cobra Clutch
- GROUND - - STRIKE ATTACKS - 1) Wrestling Hero Stomp 2) Wrestling Hero Stomp - GRAPPLE FACING UP - - UPPER: Outlaw Stomp - SIDE: Walk Over - LOWER: Belly Stomp - GRAPPLE FACING DOWN - - UPPER: Brain Chop 2 - SIDE: Soccorball Kick 3 - LOWER: Knee Slam - SUB GRAPPLE - - UPPER: Triangle Hold - SIDE: Camel Clutch 2 - LOWER: Sharpshooter - CORNER - - STRIKE ATTACKS - - CORNER GROGGY - - FRONT: Punch to Head 3 - BEHIND: Overhand Punch 2 - RUNNING FRONT: Turnbuckle Clothesline - RUNNING BEHIND: Clothesline 11 - SEATED: Punch to Head 4 - RUNNING SEATED: Running Knee Strike 1 - TOP ROPE - - STRIKE: Punch to Head 2 - RUNNING: Big Boot 1 - TREE OF WOE - - STRIKE: Kick to Gut - RUNNING: Low Dropkick - GRAPPLE MOVES - 1) Batista Shoulder Block 2) Clothesline 7 - GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) Final Cut 2) Toss into Ring Post - TOP ROPE GRAPPLE: Pump Up Buster - TOP ROPE GRAPPLE BEHIND: Reverse Death Valley - SEATED CORNER GRAPPLE: Alley Oop Bomb - TREE OF WOE GRAPPLE: Double Knee Backbreaker - EXPLODER TURNBUCKLE: Belly to Belly 5
- ROPE - - GROGGY AGAINST ROPES: Slingshot Suplex
- APRON - - STRIKE ATTACKS - - TO RING: Right Hook - TO RINGSIDE: Axe Handle to Ringside - GRAPPLE - - TO RING: Apron Guillotine Drop - TO APRON: Apron Hip Toss - TO APRON BEHIND: Apron Backbreaker - OUTSIDE APRON: Cut Down - OUTSIDE APRON BEHIND: Apron Low Blow - GROUND - - ATTACK: Apron Leg Drop - GRAPPLE: Apron Big Boot - RUNNING - - TO RINGSIDE: Apron Clothesline - TO APRON: Running Elbow Strike
- DIVING - - DIVING ATTK VS. STANDING - 1) Flying Clothesline 2) Diving Clothesline 2 - DIVING ATTK VS. DOWNED - 1) Diving Leg Drop 4 2) Diving Senton Bomb
- RUNNING - - RUNNING STRIKES: Clothesline 2 - GRAPPLE - 1) Running STO 2) Facebuster Knee Smash - GRAPPLE FROM BEHIND - 1) One-Handed Bulldog 2 2) Chop Block - GROUND STRIKES: - IRISH WHIP REBOUND - - ATTACK: Clothesline 2 - GRAPPLE: One-Handed Spinebuster 2 - GRAPPLE: Powerslam 5 - REVERSAL: Knee Lift - PULL BACK ATTACKS - - ATTACK: Big Boot - GRAPPLE: Samoan Drop
- TAG TEAM - - STANDING TAG TEAM - 1) Double Chokeslam 2) Double Neckbreaker 3) Wheelbarrow 4) Clothesline and Chop Block - CORNER TAG TEAM - 1) Chin Lock and Kenka Kick 2) Clothesline and Spear 3) Whip Clothesline 4) Sidewalk and Reverse DDT - TAG TEAM FINISHERS - *Atomic Drop and Big Boot* (See No Evil)
- SPECIAL MOVES - - SIGS - 1) PumpHandle Gutbuster 2) Pale Justice - FINISHERS - 1) Snap Reverse DDT 2) Edgecution (Sightless Torment) - ROYAL RUMBLE - -GRAPPLE- 1) Elbow Smash 2) Body Punch 2 3) Toe Kick 4) Knee Lift -FINISHERS- 1) Chokeslam 2) Chokeslam 3) Chokeslam 4) Chokelsam - LADDER - - STRIKE ATTACK - - NORMAL: Punch to Head - STRONG: Brain Chop - GRAPPLE - - NORMAL: Smash Ladder 1 - GROGGY: Kicks it Down -FINISHERS- 1) Chokeslam 2) Chokelsam - CELL - - CEILING GRAPPLE: Chokeslam - CELL FIN: Powerbomb
TAG TEAM
MOTION: Brothers of Destruction SONG: Welcome to the Family - Avenged SevenFold MOVIE: Batista TAG FINISHER: See No Evil (Atomic Drop and Big Boot)
|
|