Monte
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Post by Monte on Mar 26, 2010 17:13:58 GMT -5
before i make the promo i need permission to make a 2nd CAW. i sent Mizer a msg a week ago, but no response. And Jackle, please dont comment.  Now lets get started! *Mike is sitting outside of his house. In the pool area. Hes sitting in a beach chair watching TV. His butler came by him.* "Hey Mike, remember Death?" "Hmmm... Death Death Death... Umm. Its that guy with the afro?" "No. Its the guy with..." "Shhhhh. I dont need your help. I remember. He wore the clown mask right?" "Yes." "Yeah i remember him. Why you ask?" *Mike gets up and stretches* "He apparently joined a new federation. AWF." "Never heard of that." "I got Death's last match recorded." *Mike puts the tape in the video player. And watches it.* "Damn he got his ass whooped. Who is that guy?" "Osiris sir." "Hmmm. Get me a Coca-Cola. I'm going to sign up for this federation." *Mikes butler comes back with Pepsi* "We only have Pepsi sir, is that alright?" *Mike almost finish dialing the number, but he looked at him.* PS3limit |
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Monte
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Post by Monte on Mar 26, 2010 17:24:42 GMT -5
"No that ain't right! I dont want stupid Pepsi!"
*Mike grabs the Pepsi can & chucks it at the butler. Causing him to fall in the pool*
*Mike ignores the fact that he fell in the pool. Hes thinking he can be a star. Be a World Heavy Weight Champion*
"This is going to great. Im going to kick some ass and become the best."
"Talking to yourself again sir?"
"Shut up Geoffrey. Go to the store & buy me a coke. Come back with Pepsi, i'll kill you."
*Mike calls AWF HQ, and orders a application form.*
*Mike has a big smerk on his face while ordering*
So, what do you guys think? Mike, is like me in a way. He has my name, but with more attitude. I gave him a personality, more than a backstory. (Death had opposite) So give me your opinions guys. And permission to do a 2nd CAW.
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dragon
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Post by dragon on Mar 27, 2010 11:13:21 GMT -5
As I am not admin, i can not say ok for the second caw, but i really see no one having a problem with that.
Before You create Him, just make sure, this is a caw, You wish to play! That You have a firm idea on Who He is and how You plan to play Him. 0nly reason i say this is from my past exp, some ideas sound better, than they work out. I have stopped playing 3 caws for one reason or another!
Now my comments on this promo, what I got from this is..the guy is rich as He has a butler, He likes coke and not Pepsi and for some reason has something in the past with death...But not much else.
now to offer suggestions..to use an example..if He is rich and has attitude..he needs to be more William regal..I am so much a better class person than you poor people are! In other words a snob! not just the fact I have money.
fill in the Death aspect more, Why do I not like him and for what reason or reasons!
You have him thinking i could be a star, but with no exp to back him up , nothing in the promo about him having any wrestling exp!
Just some quick thoughts
hey, have fun with him..that is the most important part of a caw..he is fun to be and do things with !
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Monte
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Post by Monte on Mar 27, 2010 23:17:37 GMT -5
Back story, I used to make federation videos 5-4 years ago. In SvR2006. I used VHS cameras and me & my friend zach commentate. Well anyways they used be partners when Mike got gang up by BoD, & Death helped because he was rivaling with Kane. They split at some point when Mike persuade for the World Heavyweight title and Death got barried alive by Undertaker soon after. I did a couple more shows on SvR2007. Then i stopped. So i decided to left off where Mike's career ended. Mike doesn't like to gloat about being rich, but Mike loves to make fun of people. Any chance he gets, he'll insult them. So he was a former superstar, so theres exp to back him up. I just didn't know how to put that in this promo. I guess Hes kinda rich i guess. Hes been losing $$$ since hes out of a job.
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Monte
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Post by Monte on Mar 27, 2010 23:20:26 GMT -5
And ouch, i have been denied.
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Monte
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Post by Monte on Jun 15, 2010 12:51:26 GMT -5
yes, my CAW has been granted! Now i need Mike aprove by admins
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Post by Spazz on Jun 15, 2010 12:57:29 GMT -5
Just go ahead and put him in the roster section. You only need to be approved on your first CAW.
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Monte
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Post by Monte on Jun 22, 2010 19:41:41 GMT -5
oh
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Post by Monte on Jun 23, 2010 20:54:15 GMT -5
Im having problems since my PS3 is in my room & my labtop has a virus i believe. & I dont feel like running back & forth from my living room to my room. So bare with me.
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Now lets get started! 
