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Post by Monte on Feb 10, 2010 20:21:06 GMT -5
Death
Formula: Hair: 2 Head Forehead all 0 Skin: 1, 100, -100 -100 -100 Height: 6'8 Shape 9 Headwear: Mask 17/23 100 -100 -74 Mask Designs: 44 Defult Outfits: 2/3 100 -100 -66 Handwear: 1/17 100 -100 0 Footware/Boot & Shoes: 6/44
Roster Application Form: Name: Death Nickname: None Hud: Death Audio Name: The Mask Man Hometown: Parts Unknown Weight Class: Heavyweight (279 lbs) Crowd Reaction: Cheer Alt: Red (These are changes. Not the whole outfit) Outfits 2/3 -72 -7 -31 Gloves 6 100 66
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Post by Monte on Feb 10, 2010 20:22:39 GMT -5
My youtube video didnt show!
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Post by Osiris on Feb 10, 2010 20:24:23 GMT -5
We'll be needing a promo.
And how you get your Youtube video is copy and paste the URL into the box, highlight it and press the Tube button you'll see above the box you type in. Should show up then.
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Post by Monte on Feb 10, 2010 20:26:37 GMT -5
Thanks i got it up.
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Post by Osiris on Feb 10, 2010 20:28:43 GMT -5
Cool. Now all we need is a promo, and a moveset if the votes go your way.
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Post by Monte on Feb 10, 2010 20:37:26 GMT -5
The arena is silent. Waiting for the next match, anticipating the match, but the power went out. The stage gets let on fire! Fire spreading, burning everything in sight! The Ring gets set on fire as well. Everybody trys to get out. shoving and pushing... The ground shakes, rocks go all oer the place. The stage knocks down. Fire from hell goes up into the air from the middle of the ring. A man in black with a clown for a face. it seemed like he was the devil himself. With an evil grin on his.. er mask he looked around the arena. The fire stopped. Death lands on the ground, kneeling, looking on the ground. Looks up, sees a camera. Picks it up, looks straight into it. He trys to do a evil laugh, but couldnt. For hes been burned alive. His lungs are burnts, filled with smoke and ashes Smoke and ashes come out of his mask. In a blink of a second, fire raises, then dissapears. So has Death. The crowed is relief, that hes gone. But he wont be gone for long. Night Night.
Theres the promo. Hope it doesnt sound dumb, crazy, or too long or anything
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Post by Monte on Feb 10, 2010 20:50:30 GMT -5
i couldnt come with an idea for dialogue
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Post by Osiris on Feb 10, 2010 23:58:55 GMT -5
Too long? No.
Dumb? Eh.
Crazy? We've had that before, and this just doesn't compare.
This is okay at best, could certainly use some work. But eh, we have certainly had worse, so I'll say yes. I have a feeling this will improve in time once he gets the hang of it.
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Post by AJ Riles on Feb 11, 2010 0:13:28 GMT -5
LOL, Yugo. LOL, Fringe. That a, ah, a reference to me there, boy? Dude, we still HAVE worse. Present tense. But hey, I'd like to think everyone's improving. Admittedly, I haven't gone over any of the new applications yet, but I'll do that at some point in the next few days when I get some time...
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Post by Monte on Feb 11, 2010 6:16:17 GMT -5
Yeah, im not very good at creativity. I saw some other promos we're there talking about being the best and stuff. In my offline stories i used to make, Death Just look at ya, and you get the message. I think he should get a helper, to say stuff for him and stuff. Mabey Ms. Swan. Who knows.
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Post by Spazz on Feb 11, 2010 19:39:08 GMT -5
Too long? No. Dumb? Eh. Crazy? We've had that before, and this just doesn't compare. This is okay at best, could certainly use some work. But eh, we have certainly had worse, so I'll say yes. I have a feeling this will improve in time once he gets the hang of it. Long? Ehh, coulda done to be longer but was okay. Dumb? Seen dumber. The promo itself...well if Death doesn't talk maybe he should have interacted with people that could talk. Just popping up in front of the crowd, looking around, then vanishing doesn't leave too much of an impression. Sooo...eh, average. Maybe stick him with that speaking handler like you said and we'll see how it goes from there. I'll let it pass.
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Post by Monte on Feb 11, 2010 19:41:44 GMT -5
ok i'll make him talk. So his promos wont just be him sitting there.
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Post by Monte on Feb 11, 2010 19:52:56 GMT -5
Can i post his move-sets?
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Post by Osiris on Feb 11, 2010 20:08:11 GMT -5
Yeah, go ahead. You only need one more yes.
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Post by Monte on Feb 11, 2010 21:30:34 GMT -5
Standard Actions: Ring in/out Over The Rope In, Backward Ring Out Apron Ring in/out Over Rope One, Over rope out Apron Ringside Heavy on the apron, Normal Apron Out 1 Taunts: Quake, Undertaker1, Undertaker 4, Undertaker 5. Standing: Strike Attacks Undertaker Punch 1, Big Boot, Throat Thrust 1,Undertaker Punch 2, Clothesline 2 Kick Reversal Clothesline, Belly to Belly, Take Down, Push it Quick Grapple Overhand punch 2, Undertake Knee Strike1, Fury Punch 2, Shoulder thrust2 Behind One hand bulldog, elbow to back of head, knee breaker2, Forearm Smash RR Grapple Toe Kick 2 Push it Body Punch 2 Throat Thrust 10 Collar & Elbow Knee strike, sleeper hold, DDt 18, Head Block, Batista Lifting & Toss Side Headlock, Grapple elbow smash 2, Crossface, Undertaker Arm Wrench, armbar2, Choke Toss, Pendulm Backbreaker. Wrist Lock, Elbow Smash 1, armbar 5, chokeslam 12, piledriver 3, Military Press Drop, Powerbomb 9 Rear Waist, Elbow Smash 3, Full Nelson, DDT 12, Back suplex 5, Sidewalk Slam 4, Side Effect 2 Ground: Strikes, Angry Stomp, Wrestling Hero stomp, elbow drop2 Moves facing up, Darkness Choke, 2 small & 1 big elbow drop, giant swing Moves facing down, Back Chop 4, Knee drop 2, Knee smash Submission (Both) Triangle Hold, Camel Clutch, Single Leg Boston Crab Corner Strikes, boxing Punch 1, Turnbuckle clothesline 2, Dropkick to groin Grapple, Turnbuckle powerbomb, toss to turnbuckle, Superflex, Kane strikes Back Grapple, Forearm to back, snake eyes, super back suplex, Toss into ring post Sitting grapple, Alley oop bomb Rope Boxing rope body rush Apron: Strikes, Hook to ring, axe handle to ring Grapple, apron suplex to ringside, apron hip toss, apron shoulder block apron pulling down 1 & 2 Ground apron: Leg drop one and two Running apron, Clothesling, elbow smash, Diving: Standing, Double axe handle 3, flying clothesline 2 Downed, elbow drop two and three Running strikes, clothesline 5 and six Running grapple ddt 10 and take a back & punch Running grapple behind, HHH low kick and bulldog 3 Ground strikes, double axe handle 4 and running leg drop Irish whip rebound, Big boot 4, back body drop 2, sidewalk slam 5, reversal kick I'll post tag team moves later Signatures: Powerbomb 7 and pumphandle slam 1 Finishers: Chokeslam 3 (I call it Deathslam. Can i call it that?) chokeslam 5 RR fins: Chokeslam 10, Powerbomb 8, Chokeslam 11, Drive by kick 2
Entrance: Kane Champion Entrance; Kan two Movie: Kane: Music: Slow Chemical - Finger eleven
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