fear the night once more for Vlad is on the hunt

[Vlad]

name: Vlad
HUD name:Vlad
nickname: the impaler
announcer intro : TBA
home town:parts unknown
weight:240 lbs.
crowd reaction:bad

crowd
signs
sign 1 "ftw"
sign 2 "innovator of violence"
sign 3 " he's hardcore"
sign 4 "survive if i let you"

head
hair: 51/71 X -100 Y 74 -11 100
head: all 0
forehead: all 0
face
eye type: 5/9 : original style: X -100 Y 74 -11
eye lashes: 1/15: as is
eye brows: 1/39: as is

lips: 1/17: as is
teeth: 10/14: white

marks/scars: 12/23: as is
marks/scars: 13/23: as is

skin tone: 5/12: as is
skin aging: 28

face morphing

eye brows: -37,-52,-49,100
eyes: all 0
nose: all 0
cheeks:all 0
mouth: 18,-28,-8,-21,16,-13,-100
jaw: 100,31,100,-37,23,100
ears: -34,28,0,-25

facial
hair
side burns: 15/17: -100, 74, -11
goatee: 13/14: -100, 74, -11

face
paint
84/89: as is
32/89: black

piercings
15/20: black

height: 6'0"

body type: -40

body morphing
neck: -58,0,0
chest: 0,0,0
shoulders: -100,0,-70
abs: 0,0,0
waist: 0,0
arms: 0,0,0
hands: 0,0,0
legs: 0,0,0
feet: 0,0,0

definition
4/9
body hair
torso: 4/6
tattoo 10&17/25: -100,-100,-100,50

arm-wear
arm/wrist 4/21: black
hands: 6/16: black

lower body
tights: 16/18: short, black
tight design: 46/159: white

footwear 29/37: red with black

entrance
normal: tazz
champion: tazz
music: perfect insanity (music 2 i think)
move-set
i used tazz's move set and changed only a few details

finishers
impaler (caf- kick to gut, DDT clutch, throat slit taunt, edgecution drop, kick-out DDT impact.... all 100%)
edgecution (the impaler DDT)
signature
spear (anyone will do)
anaconda vice 1

[Osiris]

Going to need a sample promo before we can decide anything. Also a moveset and entrance is needed.

[Vlad]

-the camera fades in backstage at WECW's last man standing... we see the backstage interviewer, Cassie hart, standing next to a back turned Vlad-

Cassie: Vlad after the devastating defeat at the hands of ur own son rider and losing the WECW xtreme title. how are you feeling?

-Vlad turns around-

Vlad: how am i feeling? i just went through the most violent match in my career and you ask me how i feel... (laughs) i feel great.

Cassie: you...you what?

Vlad: I've never felt better.. sure I'm sore and sure my own son stabbed me in the back but soon enough that title will be back around my gorgeous waist.

-one of Vlad's cuts starts to bleed again-

Cassie: Vlad?

Vlad: listen to me Cassie for as long as i live i will never eeeeever leave a WECW title match without gold again. Do u see this blood? Ive bled for that title more times then i can count...

Cassie: it been thirteen times (smiles innocently)

Vlad: thank u (pinches Cassie's cheek playfully)...i will be xtreme champion again and my minions will make it happen...count on it

-screen fades to black-

[Osiris]

Promo is decent, but got some problems.

1. We're trying to keep the number of "dark" characters down, seeing as we have an abundance of them running around. I can see you easily promoing as Vlad and not even going into the dark thing.

2. Your wording is good, love the Messiah of Extreme bit. But, and i know it's nitpicking, please refrain from using text English. I already know people are going to hate reading "u" when properly it should be "you". No need to rush writing a promo, you can take your time working on it, making it better.

Fix these up, and it's a easy yes from me.

[AJ Riles]

Aug 6, 2009 15:33:51 GMT -5 Osiris said:

Fix these up, and it's a easy yes from me.

...What ISN'T?

Anyway, I'll cast my vote once it's all fixed up.

[Osiris]

Alright, thanks for the PM to inform me that you've made your changes, but a regular post to bump it up will do just fine.

Edits are much better then the previous one. Bit of capitalization problems, but that's not exactly a new thing that we've encountered.

So I say yes, and on a little note you say you have a caf, but if you could actually put the stuff up to make it, that would be great.

[William James]

Suggestion also... try adding some color to the promo.
Either the name, if you intend to do that for every promo, or everything said by Vlad.
(I've seen it reversed, also, where the actions are colored, either way.)
It breaks up the promo a little better, IMO, and makes it more clear on what is action and what is spoken.

And, also... spell check is your friend.
That makes promo's better too.



Looks like Vlad might be a cool guy...
always fun to add another Hardcore guy into the mix.
esp. when he fights like Taz.

[DARKSIDE]

For what it's worth, I think he's worth a shot. His promo might be a little rough, but you guys have already given some great advice and this place might be the best place for him to hone his skills. He can only get better with more time and more involvement, I think.

I say we give him a chance, everyone. I'm not an admin, but I'll still say "yes" anyway.

[Vlad]

i need two more yeses and i really hope to get them cuz im overflowing with ideas for promos and fueds... and maby even a team up between me and the franchiser

[Osiris]

Alright, screw it. If none of the other admins have made a reply by Thursday, it shall be taken as there are no complaints and Vlad will be added to the active roster.

[Hazeone-Supreme]

Ok, here are my thoughts: The promo was rather short, but that is not too much of a big deal. I would have liked to see a bit more on his history as opposed to previous achievements but again its whatever. I am glad that Vlad is not a dark character anymore so I will say yes.....

[Vlad]

so where do i go from here... its friday no one has said anything else... and im totaly lost help me out

[Spazz]

I believe everything that I was going to say has already been said.

[Vlad]

am i free to start promoming?

[Osiris]

I would think yes.